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Writing Suggestions?

Megaera the Sunspear Posts: 306
Absent Abyss atk: 6.5 | def: 10.5 | dam: 4.5
Mare :: Pegasus :: 15 h :: 8 [Birdsong] HP: 70 | Buff: NOVICE
Gwaihir :: Golden Eagle :: None Laine
So I have two questions to pose that I have been pondering, and wondered if anyone who reads my posts on a somewhat regular basis would have to say. 

1. Character Consistency - Do my characters (and writing styles for each character) seem consistent? Good characters should grow and change, but are mine seeming to do so at a believable pace?

2. General Writing Suggestions - Do you notice any weaknesses in my writing? Suggestions for areas I can improve?

This is a pretty open invitation, and I promise I won't get all prickly, just looking to improve my writing!
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